The main character in my book is Jania
If i wrote a book the main character will be Kim the jersey cleaner
after the team is done with the jersey they give the jersey to Kim and she cleans them up for the next game and if
does not get them clean for the next game the team will not have any jersey.
3/31/09 1.Layneyis not nice in her head.
2.Layneyalway think that mean way to think than out.
3.Layneyis smart but not in the head.
4. Layney loves playing Baseball at Reases
5. she has no mom.
6. she won the running at school.
7. she lives in a home that has two windows in the front.
9.Her brother are mean to her.
10.her and her dad share a room that only has an sheat in the milld of the room.
I think that fake reading
is a wast of time
what you are doing is
just looking
at the book you are
not reading it.
I think that if you
get a
book and you
try it and you do
not know
how to ex-plane
it then get an
other book
that you can
ex-plane.
2/9/09 cause and effect
The cause in my book is that Zinkoff has to go down and get his food in the morning but he is runny late he had just out of the show and know getting dress for school.
1/22/09 persuade
I Think that David needs to tell your sister with the fact that dad is died but Clara because she think that dad will come back but he won't. So i think that you need to help your sister with her reading and her spelling to because she does not know how
to read your level yet. And to help your mom around that house and with the dishes. Then your mom let you go out some time.
So you can stay up a night and go to the barn to feed the horses and that goats.
1/21/09 meager The meager thing that happen in my book is that David Copper Field Dad died and his family was sad. The other thing is that his dad died when he was 1 years old i think it said he died in a wagon.
1/12/09 Mr. McGuire said
You need to log in your reading log every day! Also, I would like to see more details about the book in each entry.
Areas in red could be improved.
1 or D
Entries do not always have details from the book
Specific detail from book usually are on topic
One paragraph (2 - 4 sentences) each day
Detailed understanding of book demonstrated in journal
Format errors
Reading from SSR and home has missing days logged in book journal
Spelling, punctuation, and capitalization has mistakes
1/06/09
maniac likes to read book. he like to read all the time a the YMCA that were he lives at.He like to go to the library and check out the books.
1/5/09 Two goals for 2009 are ? 1. To keep my grades up an F in any in all the roomsand not to get any write ups for three months. 2. when i get home i will do my homework before playing with my brother and playing on my new laptop. -----------------------------------------------------------------
12/19/08 twilight the major problem is That Bella was hit the Edward stop the van from hurting her.Then Edward said that are you OK? Then she said that I would be OK. The major problem is that Bella does not know the Edward is a vampire. Bella was thinking what was Edward she thought that he was a vampire that way he is getting every ware fast and he can fly to so that way Bella. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
12/10/08 Shiloh The point of the story is that the book tells you that people can have problems in life and some of them are hard. I hate having problems. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
12/4/08 Shiloh
Marty and the beagle it was Sunday for dinner they had rabbit. They live North East of Ohio. M --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 12/3/08 Mr. McGuire said Sommer, please add another sentence or two when you write your journal entries. I would like to see more specific details. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 12/3/08Sarah--Harry Potter And The order Of The Phoenix
The reason I think that someone should read my book is because this book is really exciting, the way Harry is always being a hero, but never means too! If you like books that have magic, trouble,and fighting with mythical creatures. It's for you. But if you start one you will be tempted to read the rest, trust me. These books just give so much detail that you image it in your head. Like Harry fighting with Lord Voldermort. You can just see that Harry's scared but knows he has to do it. I hope you enjoyed my recommendation and you start to read them to!! If you do try these out there are 7 books in all (as of right now). I hope you start to read Harry Potter and enjoy them as much as I do. The first one is called Harry Potter And The Sorcerer's Stone if you want to read one.
12/02/08 Twilight
She wants truck and she can't get one and she does every thing to get one.her mom and dad are looking for a cars for her.
the book is good so for.he wants truck and she can't get one and she does every thing to get one.her mom and dad are looking for a cars for her.
the book is good so for.
11/17/08 high wizardry i thought that she was going to open the door and i thought that the trotters
11/14/08 high wizardry In the book Nita cried because she did not know the questions when the teacher. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
11/14/08 Seth Roberts the best part of your book sounds good to me I have watched that movie and its good but I have not read the book.
11/13/08 High wizardry Main character in the book high Wizardry is Nita
Nita is a girl that is a wizard --------------------------------------------------------------------------
11/12/08
The witch is not like the girl Dorothy in the book.
11/11/08 Shelby C.
I think this book sounds pretty good i should try it after some other books i been reading about.Your book sounds like off of a show off of Disney channel too me I love to hear some more of your book so i can comment you some more . about your book your reading about tell me some facts about your book. I would love to here tell me more details about your book your book sounds pretty en retesting . where you got your book from is there pictures or just writing in the book is this book have weird stuff in it ? you should ready a book I'm reading the fear park
11/11/08The best part in my book
is that when Dorothy prod the packet of water on the witch.
then Dorothy took the broom and went back to the Emerald city and the wizard of oz said come back tomorrow and i with grand you your with and Dorothy said i want to go home know. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
11/10/08 wicked
) kill the witch
2) tacking the the broom stick
3)going to see the great oz
4) Dorothy going home
5) poring water on the witch
6) fowling the yellow brick road
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11/07/08 Wicked I predict that Toto will come back in the mittal of the book I hope so because he was my favorite character in the book. My other predict that the witch will kill the people in the Emeralds city because the people are evil in this book because they do not like the witch at all because all the thang that the witch did to them. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 11/07/08 Mr. McGuire said
I am glad you have started on your book journal. Please tell me more. The more details you include, the better your journal will be! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
11/6/08 Wicked the weird thang is Toto is only in the book the wizard of Oz but in wicked Toto the dog is not in wicked and --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 11/5/08 Wicked
Wicked is like the wizard of oz but mostly with the same characters. My favorite character in wicked is Dorothy and her dog Toto.
Date
Title and Details
Pages
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Title:The secret moose
Start Time: 1:35 End Time: 2:10
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Start Page: 26
End Page: 36
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Title: The secret moose
Start Time: 1:35
End Time: 2:10
Start Page:35
End Page:36
ssr
Title: The Secret moose
Start Time: 1:35 End Time: 2:05
Start Page:36
End Page:40
ssr
Title:High wizardry
Start Time:2:00 End Time: 2:15
Start Page:6
End Page:7
ssr
11/12
Title: high wizardry
Start Time: 2:15 End Time: 2:25
Start Page:7
End Page:9
ssr
11/20
Title: high wizardry
Start Time: 1:45 End Time: 2:15
Start Page:21
End Page:34
ssr
12/14
Title: the moose
Start Time: 1:35 End Time:2:15
Start Page: 36
End Page:40
SSR
12/18
Title: Twilight
Start Time:11:00
End Time: 11:30
Start Page:1
End Page:12
H
12/19
Title:twilight
Start Time:10:10
End Time:10:19
Start Page:12
End Page:16
H
12/26
Title:twilight
Start Time:8:12
End Time: 8:20
Start Page:16
End Page:26
H
12/27
Title:twilight
Start Time:9:50
End Time: 10:01
Start Page:26
End Page:29
H
12/28
Title:twilight
Start Time:9:45
End Time: 10:15
Start Page:29
End Page:37
H
12/29
Title:twilight
Start Time:1:46
End Time: 2:15
Start Page37:
End Page:46
H
1/14
Title:david copper field
Start Time:2:08 End Time: 2:14
Start Page:9
End Page:11
SSR
1/17
Title:david copper field
Start Time:10:11 End Time: 10:21
Start Page:11
End Page:14
H
1/18
Title:david copper field
Start Time:10:43 End Time: 10:53
Start Page:14
End Page:19
H
1/18
Title:david copper field
Start Time:11:40 End Time: 11:54
Start Page:19
End Page:29
H
1/22
Title:david copper field
Start Time:1:54 End Time: 2:15
Start Page:29
End Page:42
SSR
1/22
Title::david copper field
Start Time:10:14 End Time: 10:42
If i wrote a book the main character will be Kim the jersey cleaner
after the team is done with the jersey they give the jersey to Kim and she cleans them up for the next game and if
does not get them clean for the next game the team will not have any jersey.
3/31/09
1.Layney is not nice in her head.
2.Layney alway think that mean way to think than out.
3.Layney is smart but not in the head.
4. Layney loves playing Baseball at Reases
5. she has no mom.
6. she won the running at school.
7. she lives in a home that has two windows in the front.
9.Her brother are mean to her.
10.her and her dad share a room that only has an sheat in the milld of the room.
I think that fake reading
is a wast of time
what you are doing is
just looking
at the book you are
not reading it.
I think that if you
get a
book and you
try it and you do
not know
how to ex-plane
it then get an
other book
that you can
ex-plane.
2/9/09 cause and effect
The cause in my book is that Zinkoff has to go down and get his food in the morning but he is runny late he had just out of the show and know getting dress for school.
1/22/09 persuade
I Think that David needs to tell your sister with the fact that dad is died but Clara because she think that dad will come back but he won't. So i think that you need to help your sister with her reading and her spelling to because she does not know how
to read your level yet. And to help your mom around that house and with the dishes. Then your mom let you go out some time.
So you can stay up a night and go to the barn to feed the horses and that goats.
1/21/09 meager
The meager thing that happen in my book is that David Copper Field Dad died and his family was sad. The other thing is that his dad died when he was 1 years old i think it said he died in a wagon.
1/12/09 Mr. McGuire said
You need to log in your reading log every day! Also, I would like to see more details about the book in each entry.
Areas in red could be improved.
1 or D
1/06/09
maniac likes to read book. he like to read all the time a the YMCA that were he lives at.He like to go to the library and check out the books.
1/5/09 Two goals for 2009 are ?1. To keep my grades up an F in any in all the rooms and not to get any write ups for three months.
2. when i get home i will do my homework before playing with my brother and playing on my new laptop.
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12/19/08 twilight the major problem isThat Bella was hit the Edward stop the van from hurting her.Then Edward said that are you OK? Then she said that I would be OK. The major problem is that Bella does not know the Edward is a vampire. Bella was thinking what was Edward she thought that he was a vampire that way he is getting every ware fast and he can fly to so that way Bella.
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12/10/08 ShilohThe point of the story is that the book tells you that people can have problems in life and some of them are hard. I hate having problems.
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12/4/08 ShilohMarty and the beagle it was Sunday for dinner they had rabbit. They live North East of Ohio. M
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12/3/08 Mr. McGuire said Sommer, please add another sentence or two when you write your journal entries. I would like to see more specific details.
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12/3/08 Sarah--Harry Potter And The order Of The Phoenix
The reason I think that someone should read my book is because this book is really exciting, the way Harry is always being a hero, but never means too! If you like books that have magic, trouble,and fighting with mythical creatures. It's for you. But if you start one you will be tempted to read the rest, trust me. These books just give so much detail that you image it in your head. Like Harry fighting with Lord Voldermort. You can just see that Harry's scared but knows he has to do it. I hope you enjoyed my recommendation and you start to read them to!! If you do try these out there are 7 books in all (as of right now). I hope you start to read Harry Potter and enjoy them as much as I do. The first one is called Harry Potter And The Sorcerer's Stone if you want to read one.
12/02/08 Twilight
She wants truck and she can't get one and she does every thing to get one.her mom and dad are looking for a cars for her.
the book is good so for.he wants truck and she can't get one and she does every thing to get one.her mom and dad are looking for a cars for her.
the book is good so for.
11/17/08 high wizardry
i thought that she was going to open the door and i thought that the trotters
11/14/08 high wizardry In the book Nita cried because she did not know the questions when the teacher.
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11/14/08 Seth Roberts the best part of your book sounds good to me I have watched that movie and its good but I have not read the book.
11/13/08 High wizardryMain character in the book high Wizardry is Nita
Nita is a girl that is a wizard
--------------------------------------------------------------------------
11/12/08The witch is not like the girl Dorothy in the book.
11/11/08 Shelby C.
I think this book sounds pretty good i should try it after some other books i been reading about.Your book sounds like off of a show off of Disney channel too me I love to hear some more of your book so i can comment you some more . about your book your reading about tell me some facts about your book. I would love to here tell me more details about your book your book sounds pretty en retesting . where you got your book from is there pictures or just writing in the book is this book have weird stuff in it ? you should ready a book I'm reading the fear park
11/11/08The best part in my book
is that when Dorothy prod the packet of water on the witch.
then Dorothy took the broom and went back to the Emerald city and the wizard of oz said come back tomorrow and i with grand you your with and Dorothy said i want to go home know.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
11/10/08 wicked) kill the witch
2) tacking the the broom stick
3)going to see the great oz
4) Dorothy going home
5) poring water on the witch
6) fowling the yellow brick road
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------11/07/08 Wicked
I predict that Toto will come back in the mittal of the book I hope so because he was my favorite character in the book. My other predict that the witch will kill the people in the Emeralds city because the people are evil in this book because they do not like the witch at all
because all the thang that the witch did to them.
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11/07/08 Mr. McGuire said
I am glad you have started on your book journal. Please tell me more. The more details you include, the better your journal will be!
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11/6/08 Wickedthe weird thang is Toto is only in the book the wizard of Oz but in wicked Toto the dog is not in wicked and
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
11/5/08 Wicked
Wicked is like the wizard of oz but mostly with the same characters. My favorite character in wicked is Dorothy and her dog Toto.
Read
or SSR
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11/7/08
Title:The secret moose
Start Time: 1:35
End Time: 2:10
Start Page: 26
End Page: 36
ssr**
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